Hello Arjunians. back with a new part. hope u like it!
Errors honge kyun ki jaldi jaldi mein likha hai. so plz excuse errors.
Thanks to all my readers who motivate me to write more. thanks a ton. The constant urge from ur side has brought me back......
So here it goes...
Disclaimer: I am dealing with live in and living together in my own way and it may be far from what really happens...
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Chapter 23:
All he could think was to wrap his arms around her and close all the distance between them but he controlled his urge…..He didn’t even want to kiss her in the spur of the moment….He knew she might just give in to him but he was sure that she would regret later which he didn’t want….He would never regret anything but not her….He wanted to give her all the time she required in this relationship…..He wouldn’t tempt or force her into anything impulsively….He realized that the magical passion which was catching up on them was a bit dangerous….He couldn’t let it take over his senses…he had to put it off soon….so he spoke up, “Lets go out somewhere…..We can have dinner on our way back….”
She was enjoying the peace she felt when close to him…..She didn’t want to break that moment but then she hummed, “hmmm”
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He didn’t have a particular place in mind when he proposed of the plan to go out but Arjun just drove away. He just needed some get away from that situation. He couldn’t go out of control and do anything crazy with her.
Moreover, in her company, the place they could go seemed irrelevant. He knew he was crazily in love with her and she was going to be his girl some day…but to keep himself silent and his hands off her was the biggest challenge he was facing ever since she decided to give them a chance and tonight was no different.
The long drive and romantic music was having its effect on him but the lady beside him, she seemed totally inscrutable. He couldn’t gauge what she was feeling. Was she enjoying this lone time with him or was she still in denial or perhaps in Sameer mode? He was a little apprehensive to ask or even start a topic.
Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai
Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
The song brought her out of her thoughts and she couldn’t stop herself from turning to his side. His gaze was already resting on her occasionally and their eyes met for a brief moment before she snapped away and he also focused back on the road.
He whistled the tune and she had to accept that she loved it. When he stopped, she turned to him, “It was good……”
Arjun smiled at the first compliment from her and he was also happy that she started the conversation this time. He was silently waiting for it to happen that way and he replied, “You liked it?”
She nodded, “hmmm…..accha tha….why did you stop it?”
He chuckled and his naughty self was out, “doctor ji, poore drive pe sirf yahi kartha rahoom kya?”
She couldn’t help laughing and her laugh was so mesmerizing that he had already stopped the car by the side and his gaze settled on her pretty face. Oblivious to the effect she and her laugh made on him, she continued smiling. Only when his palm cupped her hand, did she realize that and he voiced, “We do have better things to do, right?”
Reva shuddered at the intimate way he engulfed her hands and slightly nudged her fingers…..It triggered off something inside her….a sensual feeling which always appeared far fetched for her…..It confused her and also left her bewildered about how Arjun was able to do it to her so easily and within a short time of knowing each other….His soft and romantic voice and his naughty line wasn’t making it any better for her. She was forced to look into his deep intense eyes and she was just struck there….she couldn’t deny the strong attraction she felt for the guy next to her. He was indeed drawing her closer and tugging her heart deeply with his magical charms.
Namkin Si Baat Hain
Har Nayi Si Baat Mein
Teri Khusboo Chal Rahi
Hai Jo Mere Saath Mein
Halka Halka Rang Beete Kal Ka
Gehra Gehra Kal Ho Jayega
Ho Jayega
Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega
Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega
When he felt that he could be scaring her away with all this, he quickly pointed to the window, “jaise Dinner?? I am damn hungry”
She snapped out of the moment and looked to the direction he pointed. That’s when she realized that they were in the parking lot of a restaurant…
She nodded with a faint smile, “ohhh….”. A relief or was it a disappointment which surged inside her….she didn’t know which feeling was more. She tried to rubbish the feeling by commenting on the choice of the restaurant, “Arjun, yeh toh South Indian restaurant hai….but you prefer north Indian na?”
Arjun smiled and replied taking his hands off hers, “I know south Indian is your favorite cuisine Reva…..aur aaj officially humaara pehla dinner date hai…..I had to do something special for you but kuch aur karne keliye time nahi milaa….sudden plan tha na? Atleast food toh tumaara favorite hona chahiye…itna toh kar hi saktha hoom…..”
He noticed her glance on her hand from where he had taken his hands off….something told him that she had quite liked him holding her hand….perhaps her expressions said it all…She voiced, “Arjun….itna formal hone ki….”
He snapped her short there with a chuckle and then in a serious tone, he voiced intently looking at her, “formality ki baat nahi baat zaroorat ki hai doctor…..aise baaton ka koyi khaas reason nahi hota.....We need to just go with the flow……wahi humein aur khareeb laayega…[he leaned as if to kiss her cheeks but stopped a little short when he saw her moving her head away….he hadn’t anyways intended to kiss her…..so he just stopped and voiced]..samjhe ya samjhaavum?”
She didn’t argue further but just nodded…..He stepped out and came to her side but she had got off without waiting for him…He smiled at her before asking her to lead the way, “after you”
She started walking towards the entrance and he sprinted to join her side…..He didn’t ask but just entwined his fingers with hers and dragged her closer…She was stunned but didn’t protest it but just decided to let go…..She should have freed her hands from his but she couldn’t…it felt so right and meant to be…
Bekhudi Mein Dhal Ke
Bekali Mein Jal Ke
Sau Naazare Yaadein Nam Ho Jati Hai
Fika Fika Pal Betein Kal Ka
Behka Behka Kal Ho Jayega
Ho Jayega
Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega
Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega
Arjun didn’t have any special liking for south Indian but today he let her decide for him…..
“Are your sure Arjun?” Reva enquired again when he held the menu card to her and asked her to order for him as well…
Arjun nodded with a wide smile and naughtily commented, “Yup…mere life hi tumaare haathon mein hai doctor…then whats the big deal about dinner? I am sure I will love your choices”
His naughty line trying to woo her made her blush a little and also smile. But she replied, “phir bhi….I suggest…”
He placed his hand on hers, “I insist you do it for me…”
There were no ifs and buts after that….she pulled her hand slowly from under his as it was having a strange effect on her….she did it pretending that she couldn’t hold the menu card with just the other hand but then he was quick to understand the real reason.
Intezzaar Sa Hai
Imtehaan Sa Hai
Itminaan Sa Hai
Kya Hai Na Jane
ITraa Rahi Hai
Itna Hui Hai
Intehaan Rahi Hai
Kaise Na Jane
Chalka Chalka
Pal Beete Kal Ka
Tehra Tehra Kal Ho Jayega
Ho Jayega
Her smiles, her shying away, her protests, her half hearted denials….her soft gestures and talks were all making him crazy…..He inhaled deeply and ran his fingers across his hair as an attempt to hide the impact she had on him.
She was busy ordering the food and he wasn’t able to take his eyes off her. He was glancing and understanding even the slightest nuances and expressions she showed……he found even the silliest gestures cute…When she made a mistake or a slip of tongue, she bit her nails and pouted….She crunched her perky nose when she disapproved of something and her eyes had a twinkle when she was excited about something…..While in deep thoughts, she bit her lips and her fingers played with her curls….…Unaware of her, he understood every single bit of her….When she bit her lips, he had a tough time controlling himself from stopping her do that….He smacked and grinned at his own thoughts when he felt sad for the hurt she was causing to her lovely lips…..Werent they mine? How could she so mercilessly hurt them?
She on the other hand was trying her best to keep the feelings and sensations that he evoked within her under control…She had noticed his eyes on her but was trying not to get affected by it…she tried to talk but soon felt tongue tied as their gazes met…..
Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega
Aadha Ishq Aadha Hai
Aadha Ho Jayega
Kadmo Se Milo Ka
Vada Ho Jayega
Adha Ishq
The food arrived soon snapping him out of his study of his doctor saahiba and every minute detail of hers….She also was saved from the eyelock which was making her feel strange and weird…
They started to have dinner…..She didn’t look up from her plate until absolutely necessary…Perhaps love had an effect on his taste buds also. He took an instant liking to the dosa she ordered for him….she had opted for masala dosa…..He didn’t think twice before taking a piece of it from her plate surprising her totally….After that, she decided not to get surprised by his actions…..She was slowly trying to expect the unexpected from him….atleast that much she learnt about him in these few hours….
She was never the kind who liked sudden plans, sudden surprises and unexpected behavior from anybody….She was always the type who loved to follow a time table, a convention and always plan things ahead….. But with him, she surprised herself as she kind of started liking this behavior of his.
He was also happy as for the first time, he felt that she was moving out of the confines which she had built around her….She was trying to let go and to top it all, she hadn’t spoken anything about Sameer all through the evening which was by itself a good sign…
The dessert she ordered was unusual or rather unique like her….a filter coffee and he let go of his other choices and went with the same……
As they got back into the car, he commented, “I told you na…I am going to like this dinner…It was awesome….the dessert was the best”
She looked to his side acknowledging the praise he was showering on her choices.
That’s when his gaze wandered all over her face starting from her beautiful deep dark eyes…It stopped at her full luscious lips….He couldn’t take his eyes off as the desire to kiss her soared up but he also couldn’t do it without her will….
A little while before at the restaurant, the foam of the coffee which settled on her lips and above that had attracted his attention…He had longed to wipe it away from there and more than that, he had desired to kiss it away from there…..The memory of that lusty thought came back running to his mind…well it wasn’t just lust perhaps…
He fully turned to her side and voiced in a lost dream like tone, “You made my evening special Reva….Will you make it more special and most memorable?”
She didn’t understand that and so just looked at him enquiringly and waited for him to say what he expected from her
[To be continued]
So how was it? pls do reply
No silent reading SYS?
Without ur comments I wont continue this story....so u know what to do....right?
lovely part di :)
ReplyDeletei'm loving the slow pace of their love.......:)
the way he made her blush , laugh is awesome ::)
on the other hand the effect reva cause of arjun and vice versa loved it !
haye !! they made me crazy for them .......i want masala dosa now :P .......
song was lovely and so romantic added more essence to the lovely atmosphere :D
please update soon di <3
aww thanks dear....I love to write ARRE too be it ZMD or ZEP.....
Deletelovely date
ReplyDeleteShe is comfortable with him, and ACP is doing everything to woo his Doctor Sahiba
Awesome part
thanks dear.....hmmm Arjun in this story is full on lover boy all set to woo her!
Deleteawe!!!!!so cute dinner date di.....
ReplyDeleteindeed awesome one.....Arjun and his naughty mind thinking was so cool......
loved how reva is adapting for arjun's surprise......
fantastic update di.....
anu91 as in IF di.....
thanks dear..so happy u liked it....yeah dinner date and also a scene to portray the growing closeness and comfort level!
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ReplyDeletewonderful update
ReplyDeleteloved it
gud to see reva comfortable wid arjun
there relation is progressing slowly slowly
Loved aree dinner date...
arjun is soo romantic...
plzz update soon...
thanks....hmmm this love track will develop slowly but I guess its speeding up now as Reva seems to have fallen for his charms.....but keep urself ready for an emotional roller coaster very soon!
Deletekyun ki yeh zindagi hai toh ek paheli aur Ishq nahi hai aasaan
Loved the first date a lot. After a long time you have updated
ReplyDeleteit felt so fresh
waiting for the next part
thanks dear....hmmm was missing them....
DeleteFinally you updated
ReplyDeletewas eagerly waiting for it
it was awesome
loved ARRE dinner date
waiting for the next part
continue soon
thanks.....i am happy u liked it...
DeleteWonderful Update
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written
Continue Soon.
Waiting eagerly KC2 update as well.
Please continue soon
thanks....KC 2 will come around the weekend
DeleteDate Was Nice... but Felt as Short n Filler..... Sorry....
ReplyDeleteWas It Because of the Long Gap.... hmmmm..... Have To Read FF From Start....
is Arjun Going to Kiss Reva In Next Update..... I Hope Not... Every Move Should Be From Reva Only... Not From Arjun.....As He Said.... Baki Aap Janthe Ho..... And i Trust Your Writing....
Waiting... For Next Update..... :)
It wasnt a filler but I guess the slow pace made u think so...his effect on her had to grow slowly.....and i also felt that before the start of an emotional roller coaster, I had to give u ppl something happy and feel good....
Deletehe might wish to kiss her but he wont....lol
yeah every move is from Reva only....it was just that he read her mind or her consent to hold her hands...I guess at some point, the couple would know what the other want or wish....
thanks for the comment!
What The !!
Delete"he might wish to kiss her but he wont" But Why Wish Her... And Disappoint Her By Not Kissing Her... :P ;)
I cant let them kiss so soon na? devilish me....waise bhi, they have just started their romance...itni jaldi kiss...ho hi nahi saktha......
DeleteI am old fashioned..lol
btw, didnt u tell that he shouldnt kiss....phir ab kya hua? lol
DeleteYep... I Said Shouldn't Kiss Her and not Even Ask For It... :P
DeleteHe is not gonna ask for it..I only said he wishes for it...anyways wait till I post the next part..hope u like it....
DeleteI cant believe we are discussing this..lol
Di I just hope that this time my comments will be posted...
ReplyDeleteThis was an amazing amazing amazing update Di..
Aap kya roz honey leti ho???
Coz this was naturally sweet as honey..
Not like sugar..
I was feeling blessed for Reva...
The way Arjun kept her close...I was feeling heavenly..
Then when the abrupt planning for date/dinner was brilliant. .
Where from are they running! !!
The pace was so apt Di..
I was also falling in love as they were falling..
Beautiful. ..so serene..
Loved the small small moments..
Loved their intentional touch..
Loved the way the were coming closer. .
Forgetting some inhibitions..
Their eyelocks..I could see them as if..and was feeling blessed..
The dessert was reminding me Reva n Arjun in ZMD..
Different though..
Then the car scene..
Wow..Arjun is such a gentleman..
Plzzz Reva say yessss..say yess..
The song selections were awesome Di..
Ab mai darr rhi hun..
Hope the comment will be posted this time..
Thanks for including me here Di..you are such a sweetheart..thank you..shank you..
I am blushing and grinning like an idiot.....I think the magic isnt honey but ARRE and my emotional involvement into their story! I take so much time thinking abt what to write for them.....
DeleteLong wait for ZEP vidya :)
ReplyDeleteFirst official date in South Indian restaurant. Well I too love South Indian food.
Keen observation of his beloved Doctor Saahiba. LOL
I got a query here, the moment he comes close to her, there is a kind of awkwardness or a slight fear in her. Awkwardness to I can understand but fear? Does this have anything to do with vishal?
she is basically scared of falling in love but she fails to understand at this point that she is already in love....she has trust issues as well...so she doesnt want to let go...
Deleteand yes the intimacy scares her.....the effect Arjun has on her scares her!
First of all thank you soo much di for continuing this beautiful saga <3
ReplyDeleteThe two songs you added just added to the already magical ambiance Arre created...two of my favorites also :))
Hehe i love the line about arjun thoughts about Reva lips...his love is soo strong that he cant see reva hurting herself...and yeah we know the naughty side of ACP saab too ;) ;)
The south-Indian vs north-Indian food reminds me of many things :p and especially the song kashmir mein tu main kanyakumari ^_^
Kiss kiss i want the kiss too :P but only jab you feel its appropriate ^_^
Love the update very much...the whole process where we'll eventually witness a beautiful and equally magical love story :D
Thank you sooo sooo much...lots of love and hugs to you <3
kiss bhi hoga....patience darling!
Deletethanks
From Aisha
ReplyDeletewow!!!! sooo romantic...romance at its best!
thnk u for this Date Special update dii! never knew a simple dinner can get so mch special nd romantic!
i guess i knw wat arjun is gonna ask to reva ;)
continue sooonish diii
love
Aisha
and a hearty thank u for this pm :)
dat ws a really sweet upd8
ReplyDeleted dinner d8 ws beautifully writn
i'm really luvng d way d stry is goin
do cntinue soon
nd thnk u 4 d pm
Loved the update Vidzi. Fantastic first date, and south indian food (my favorite) what else can one ask for.
ReplyDeleteArjun and Reva's relationship is progressing nicely, continue soon.
awesome update...
ReplyDeleteis he really going to ask her for kiss!!!!!!!!!!
loved the update....
awesome writing....u ve expressed each feeling so beautifullly....
pls dont stop this story of urs and for that matter other stories as welll!!1
got a break of two days
ReplyDeleteand i'm glad that you're back with ZEP di
the update was super duper awesome n mindblowing
the magical effect which Arjun n his doctor saahibaa have on each other is
truly amazing n was really beautifully defined
and Arjun keenly observing her n trying to know her more was wonderful
n loving on his part
while his gaze's effect on Reva was really nice as well
loved the whole part
thanks for pm
plz do cont soon
I can understand Reva's feeling.
ReplyDeleteEven I am falling for this Arjun ;)
They way he was noticing Reva's every gestures & postures was superb.
Well, I have no idea of Indian food but I liked that Arjun chose Reva's choice over his.
Cont soon.
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ReplyDeletedi do give update.......
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